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Rank 9586 (-121)
Word Count
417
Date submitted
02.03.2010
Date Updated
by between_the_pages
Poem
Who will pick it up? Who will stop? For whom will it be too late?
[ | ] Are you next?
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wrote 111 days ago
The beggining of this poem was very capturing because of the word choices that you used. I like the style of this poem, it flows well but doesn't rhyme. I like that! Is this published?? If so, that is awesome!! I really like the wording you used in stanza #6. My favorite types of poems are those that use awesome wording, not just rambling on, and for the most part, you did just that. Like Kirat Kaur said, the reader doesn't comprehend the meaning at first, but when you get deeper into it, the reader does. Anyways, good job :)
wrote 114 days ago
Wow. This was extremely well thought out, and written. I cannot believe how much emotion was packed behind such a simple concept. Wonderful!
wrote 172 days ago
very well written !! keep up the good work!!
wrote 173 days ago
A very gripping poem.The reader is not able to fully comprehend the meaning of what you're trying to say at first but there's still something there that does not allow me to navigate away from the page.And once I reach the end, I do not regret.A beautifully written piece.Well done(=
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