Book Jacket

Rank 1252 (-1251)

Word Count

2417

Date submitted

11.15.2009

Date Updated

12.07.2009

Pigskin Memories

by between_the_pages

ShortStory: Humor, Romance, General Fiction

Jenna needed an escape and a way to entice Andrew into her arms, who knew a football game would be the answer?

"It’s the start of the weekend, a little slice of Americana: Football Friday. The crowd is already roaring when I get there. I can hear them from all the way across practice field. I see the stadium lights, they are blindingly brilliant. I can smell the leaves under my feet as I crunch through them; I am excited for this game. I’ve heard from the football literate that this team is the most competitive we’ll be facing in our home stadium.
I asked a friend, actually, my ex-boyfriend, to come and hang out with me and some of my other friends. I still cared about him, and wanted him to be included in my life, and a football game seemed like the perfect opportunity. He was already at the game, but I didn’t know that. So I waited by the bridge to the practice field. In front of me, I see someone I know walking towards the bridge. I don’t recognize him at first, but my heart jumps in my throat anyways. As he gets closer, I know who he is. The curly hair and his brilliant eyes, it was one of my new-found crushes: Andrew."

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jessi870

wrote 8 days ago

This is really great! I agree it would make a good book. :)

~Jessi

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kyliekeyser11

wrote 10 days ago

wow that was such a great story i loved it.

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bffngc

wrote 25 days ago

very real. this is something that could happen to just about anyone. but i really think u could expand.

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Aussie Chica

wrote 30 days ago

I really love it!!! Please expand on this! I reckon it would be a good book idea :) I'll get around to reading your book soon!!!! Thanks for the great read =D

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Stephanie Boman

wrote 84 days ago

This reminds me of my story. I totally relate to this. I think you could throw more in to the plot, but your characterizations are real. Good work!

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Ummyeahh

wrote 88 days ago

aww. poor Ben :[

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Climberiffic

wrote 91 days ago

ok so i definitely read this yesterday but for whatever reason my comment didn't show up :/ booo.
ANYways, i realllly liked this story. the characters are believable and the situations are realistic. yay for awkward teen romances!!!!

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Zephy Rocks

wrote 92 days ago

This is great...really sweet. Love the ending! Pretty much exactly what I wanted to happen! :)

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dawnsy

wrote 92 days ago

You are a very good writer you had me pulled into the story from the very first sentence. This is definitely a watch list piece

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grassymonster

wrote 93 days ago

I think what makes this such a good story is almost everyone can relate to it. Also very clever title! Keep it up!!

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flying2far4u

wrote 93 days ago

aww, that was adorable!! I'm a total sucker for high school romance, and this was too cute.. =)
the dailogue was a good pace as well and wasn't confusing at all, and I could really get a clear picture in my head of what you were describing. good job!!

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lhgymnast1994

wrote 93 days ago

Aww I liked it! I like the plot lin I thought the title was creative. I enjoyed it the writting was ver well done and well put together. It was absoutly great!
Pe@ce,
-LogeXD

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Islandess

wrote 97 days ago

This is really a great piece. I do see some wrong use of tenses. You switch from past to present at times. But other than that, I really do like your writing style. It's very orginial and...well the only thing that fits my description is...you! lol. This is very well-written. I was aboslutely taken by this first piece. Great job!

--Dezi

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cara_ruegg

wrote 98 days ago

WOW this is brilliantly written! i loved it! you are such a good writer. I'm so adding this to my picks when I have the room which will prob be tomorrow. Really, really am quite impressed. Your style flows nicely and is easy to read -- love it! X
just to let you know, you spelled walkl instead of walk though lol.

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Shiraz

wrote 107 days ago

I'm sure many of us have been in that awkward situation. I liked the way she handled it. Good work.

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